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PostSubject: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:38 pm

Expect some soppy poetry up here Very Happy or possibly not D:
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PostSubject: Re: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Sun Aug 28, 2011 6:44 pm

Do etttt
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PostSubject: Re: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:24 am

*still waiting* xDDD
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PostSubject: Re: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:27 pm

You're all that occupies my head,
my brains and intelligence replaced by the fondest thoughts of you
and silly little things like imagining what it'd be like to grow old with you.
I dream about holding your hand at an altar and hearing them say "you may kiss the bride"
and seeing you in that virginal white, it seems silly at times but all I can think of is spending the rest of my life wanting to say " I do".
Sometimes I think it's just a phase youre going through and that as soon as it all pans out, I'll be at that altar alone,
Drinking my way into security.

But trust me honey I want these days and all our days to be as bright as they can.
It's hard to say that at times I wonder if your thinking of me the same way I'm thinking of you.
I dream about being a sickly old man and having you there holding my hand telling me I'm gonna be okay although my numbers up,
And I'd smile at you and let you know I'll always be yours.
Even though my body gives up my heart still beats for you,
I can't explain what it is that drives me to want to be the best for you,
I can't explain why it is I can't survive without you.
Without you I can't breathe.
So rip out my lungs and show me how you fill them up with just a kiss that's planted upon swooning lips.

Losing you would blind, deafen and lame me.
and god knows I can't bear to lose my senses.
This little note is not anything I had previously
thought it was going to be,
and it's scary how easily writing comes flowing through my hands,
although no doubt I'll need to recheck it for problems.
My hands feel like they belong to your skin, and my lips well they left me for yours long ago,
I'll hold your hand when you need me and tell you to fight when you need too,
I'm not going to be around forever recent days have made me realise that,
I would be immortal if it meant I could spend eternity with you,
But I know at the end of days when my time has come and go,
My spirit my soul will be watching you and will hold your hand through it all,
Because baby when you know what love is,
you realise you can never let it go.


My personal favourite one, written not too long ago o.o, enjoy or criticise your choice Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Fri Sep 09, 2011 3:55 am

a narrative poem? Very Happy
kinda lengthy and can't see the rhyme/patterns
but still like it~ :3
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PostSubject: Re: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Fri Sep 09, 2011 9:50 am

rhyme/patterns only really apply to traditional poetry free writing/prose poetry is my preferred option :3
and ty :3
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PostSubject: Re: Sy's potential poetry corneeeer :D   Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:07 pm

I like <3
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